Teen Poetry #6 |
And The Oscar Goes To. . . |
StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Throw rocks at my window. We can meet in some romantic meadow, Under a star filled moonlit sky, With the fragrance of late spring blowing through our hair. My face will be flushed from the secrecy of our midnight rendezvous, And maybe also from the way you'll hold my hand, As we run through grass that's grown too tall. And then we'll stop at some beautiful clearing, With no one around to tell us we're too young. And we'll talk like we're in movies, With whispered feelings put into perfect words, Finally with our passion overflowing, Our love will be realized. In just one brief physical action, I'll give you myself. And it will be perfectly perfect, And we'll kiss like we're in movies. "It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
That little zero next to this post is making me sad. Sooo I'm just gonna bump this up in hopes that someone will take pity and read it. |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
heya lol can't have people sad now can we? dunno why no one responded...PIP is just getting weird lately...anywho..about the poem. it's very sweet (obviously) and it does indeed have some good stanzas...i am just in a cynical mood so don't mind me if something i say it crazy bitchy. although...i didn't really find much wrong with it...it was cheesy, but then again, sometimes life calls for cheese =) be happy! -Bergundy- "crack my head open, on your kitchen floor. to prove to you, that i have brains." -Alkaline Trio |
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StellarChica Member
since 2002-07-06
Posts 207floating down a river... |
Wow. Someone finally responded to this one. And yes. It is cheesy. That was the idea. It was supposed to be like on of those cheesy almost too perfect romantic scenes in movies. Anyway. Thanks for reading. |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
and the Poetry Oscar goes to StellarChica for her astounding performance in "And the Oscar Goes To.."!!! Elizabeth Howl at the stars, whisper when you're sleeping, I'll be there to hold you, I'll be there to stop the chills and all the weeping. |
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