Teen Poetry #6 |
AGING |
ShadyMakaveli Member
since 2002-08-21
Posts 128 |
So closes another chapter A past life to envision Sounds of a childs laughter Not ready to make decisions Don't wanna be liable Too bad there's no never never land Aging is undeniable Appears time has the upper hand Each passing moment getting older No turning back time This world couldn't be colder Gotta fight for mine A struggle with one outcome Second chances are rare Will any good finally come I'm asking in this final prayer |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
yeah. too bad there is no never never land. what a soul shattering all-too-real point. /jen/ so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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Local Parasite
since 2001-11-05
Posts 2527Transylconia, Winnipeg |
Oh I liked this... one of my favourites from you. I especially like the thoughts expressed in the second stanza. Very nice work. Parasite Learn to place poetry before people |
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