Teen Poetry #6 |
Can't hold you |
foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
I see you on posters. In movies and books. I guess I just really Dig your looks. I never met you. You can just be seen. But through my eyes You don't seem mean. I guess it's true What they say I fell for the guy thats far away. I'll never see you Touch you're hand Or get from you A wedding band But here I am Now you all see. I fell for the guy Who will never love me. "I am who I am who I am who am I?" [This message has been edited by foreverwithyou (12-31-2002 12:43 AM).] |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
this is a really good poem. This applies to some of my friend who are in love with poster boys... |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Cathy Cathy Cathy..What are we gonna do with you. LOL *Allison* "O My love |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
This was very good, that happened to me once, yep stupid me. lol. I liked this one alot, very well written! WinterWren |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
I like it. It reminds me of a lot of my friends especially after going to see Lord of The Rings... Legolas is now going to marry eight of my friends... :-/. Sometimes though, I think it's easier to fall for the poster boy than deal with a real one. |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, othersideofthemirror, i must be one of ur friends lol yea this seems to happen to me alot 2. good write ~samantha bloom~(lol i wish) "sometimes i just feel like quittin i still might why do i put up this fight? why do i still write?" [This message has been edited by dinky (01-01-2003 03:20 PM).] |
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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
This was really cute I liked it ~*~eMiLy~*~ "I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right." |
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