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Teen Poetry #6

solace in ice cream

darkling
Member

since 2001-08-28

Posts 90
altered state of mind

0 posted 2002-12-29 11:14 PM

The spoon plunges in,
exploring the freezing depths of
the favored 'comfort food'.
The pint of safeway select butter brickle
held lovingly in the caress of my hand.
I clean the spoon of frozen happiness,
sighing heavily as the movie unfolds.
A romantic comedy, the ones that make you cry.
A well-loved box of kleenex is my copilot,
as I steer through the skies of lonliness.
It is a monday night, and one spent
revelling in sadness.
In some perverted way I enjoy wallowing in sorrow.
Its like pressing a bruise to see if it hurts.
You know it will.
Another spoonful is pulled from the creamy depths,
another sigh set forth.
The blanket is pulled up farther,
the phone unplugged,
the mood set in,
and the heart ache renewed.

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2002-12-30 12:36 PM

I really like this one, it is perfectly describes the way I like to handle my heartache

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-12-30 03:48 PM

This was so good. I am envious! This is one of those poems that poeple go "Why didn`t I write that!?" LOL It was describeds so well. You are a wonderful writer! Keep it up!
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

NSnaomian
Member

since 2002-07-22

Posts 232
In my troll closet I be

3 posted 2002-12-31 02:36 PM

Very well done..love how you describe it so perfectly...Once again, nothing for me to say

Oh well. Great job
Laura

"All that I desire to point out is the general principle that Life imitates Art far more than Art imitates Life."
-Oscar Wilde

foreverwithyou
Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 204
Wonderland

4 posted 2003-01-02 04:51 AM

this was awesome i luv the title thatz why i read it!!!!will be readin more soon!!!
###CATHY###

"I am who I am who I am who am I?"

PrincessNets
Member

since 2002-10-30

Posts 103
NewYork, USA

5 posted 2003-01-02 10:34 AM

I really liked this poem. It really shows what girls (like me) will sometimes do when they are feeling down. Great job!

-Jeanette-

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