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StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

0 posted 2002-12-30 12:47 PM

When I said, "I think we should both move on."
I didn't mean you.
I was stupid not to see this coming,
But every sweet little thing you said had me blind.
"What do you think she meant when she said.."
Blah blah blah.
I know what she meant.
She meant, "I want to be with you. You could never make unhappy..even if you tried."
She meant all the things I should've said to you.
I was stupid to ever think we meant something,
But you dragged me along,
As if there were still a slight bit of hope for us.
I was stupid to think that I was finally good enough for someone.
When you said, "I just can't be with you."
. . .I hope you didn't mean me.

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2002-12-30 01:48 PM

i want to cry.. this is really sad. I am sorry if this is happening...hope things get better

branden726

Senior Member

since 2000-09-25

Posts 607
Bay City, MI

2 posted 2002-12-30 01:51 PM

Love hurts. It really does i hope you get over it.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-01-03 06:51 PM

Erin~
There is so much emotion in this piece
and you've expressed it VERY well.
I felt every word of this as I read.
Nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

mindy
Junior Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 34
VA, US

4 posted 2003-01-04 05:09 PM

Isn't it amazing how many times that we just dont want to be ourselves?....or shall we say on the receiving end?.... Great Job!

jeffwillett
Member

since 2003-01-04

Posts 86
Texas, US

5 posted 2003-01-04 10:46 PM

nice job, i think ur emotions were expressed very nicely...i can relate to the whole situation, but remember, if things like this don't happen, what would you write about?

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

6 posted 2003-01-04 10:56 PM

I agree with Jeff there: If nothing bad happened, what would we write about? I mean, we wouldn't have this wonderful peice of poetry before us. I'm not saying we should be happy that bad things happen to us, rather, we should be happy something good came out of it.
*~Rich~*

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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