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Waiting |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
Waiting I look at life and what do i see You, causing me misery Always ready to pounce on my back Making sure you are to point out what I lack You seem like you're perfect in every way and no one has anything to say So high and mighty you might be Cursing me with this jealousy (chorus) Waiting, waiting, waiting, Like a worm, here I lie Waiting, waiting, waiting, Watching you in the sky Waiting, waiting, waiting, As I begin to cry Waiting, waiting, waiting... I'm drinking the poison you give.... and wanting you to die But as you sit upon you cloud so pure I know your blessing will not endure Fate will catch up on you soul And when it does, it won't let go This will all fall back on you When everything you know falls through Pain is something you can't evade And the mosters that haunt you is only what you made (chorus) waiting for you to die..... |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Woah, some really powerful emotions there, I liked the way you put it, though I don't know about waiting for someone to die.. Well I liked it anyway. It was really very good. WinterWren |
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CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
that is supposed to be like a metaphor.... i am saying I am wanting them to hit reality, but I am suffering instead... I don't want anyone to die...lol  Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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