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Teen Poetry #6

What did I do?

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2002-12-23 09:56 PM

Is there something that I did?
Why won't you answer me?
Inside me there is a pain,
sadness, guilt.

But what did I do?
You will not answer me,
You ignore me when I ask.

The pain grows to the point
where I cry.
And still I do not know what I
did.

Still you don't answer.
Just tell me what I did,
and all will be fine.

~Did you ever have a friend that was mad at you and you didn't know what you did? That's what happened to me this evening. Just had to write about it because it was bothering me...I'm fairly new at all this poetry stuff....~

dinky
Member

since 2002-10-19

Posts 258

1 posted 2002-12-23 10:15 PM

hey,
this is good!
yea it sux when some1 is mad at u and u dont know why, but i hope everything gets better!
~samantha~

"sometimes i just feel like
quittin i still might
why do i put up this fight?
why do i still write?"

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

2 posted 2002-12-23 10:23 PM

great way to vent it all out. Pretty good !

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-24 04:42 AM

yea, I can relate well...I have that going on right now...still trying to fix it.

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

4 posted 2003-01-22 05:20 PM

Hmm, yeah, I think I know what this was about, yes. You know, you express your emotions very well in this spur-of-the-moment style. It suits you, at least in my mind. You are good at this, and I'm glad I was finally able to get you here.

*~Rich~*

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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