a long and endless journey

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Teen Poetry #6

a long and endless journey

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

0 posted 2002-12-23 12:42 PM

A year ago I sat here,
thinking of a way to
make things work.

And again, I sit here
wondering the same, but
a different person fills
your place.

Could it be that I
like to sulk in the
endless sorrows of life?

Things are different,
we are long gone,
but not forgotten.

This journey never seems
to stop.

The circle of pain
remains stuck in my heart.
The key is gone to
unlock what used to be.

The joy of our love
was tested by far
a tedious road.
In the end, a year later
friends we remain.

The long and endless
journey,
has just begun...

CloudedDreams
Member

since 2002-11-23

Posts 210
My Fantasy Realm

1 posted 2002-12-23 12:59 PM

..wow...pretty... I really like this one

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
HOPE YOU STAY LONG!!

[This message has been edited by CloudedDreams (12-23-2002 01:00 PM).]

Lakewalker
Member Elite

since 2000-08-05

Posts 3289
On the streets w/ people

2 posted 2002-12-23 01:10 PM

Welcome!!
Very interesting poem, I like how you convied the ideas, and it seemed to flow nicely as well. Good job, and keep posting.

"Be kind for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle" Plato.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-24 04:46 AM

sometimes I think I like to sulk too.

WindSong
Member

since 2002-12-23

Posts 313
Long Island, New York

4 posted 2002-12-25 07:11 PM

Thanks. I've had a rough year last year...Which some of the roughness ran into this year. My former boyfriend..who also rights here...told me about this site and obviously I'm here. It helps a lot. Thank God for friends, right? Thank you all so much...

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

5 posted 2003-01-22 05:17 PM

I seem to enjoy sulking as well, but then again, there's a reason that those who know me best know me as the master of self-loathing, though only sometimes. This is a really nice poem, Kirah, and only God knows why I didn't reply to it earlier.

*~Rich~*

Too strong to give up, to weak to move on....

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