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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Gone Pluck those heartstrings, Hope you hear some music. Rip at my heart again, Just to see if inside is a present. No matter how long it's been, Whenever you're gone, You tear up my heart. Life just feels so wrong, Whenever we're apart. We're just friends, And that way, I know we won't get hurt. That's how it's gonna stay But I still can't explain why, When you're not here, My heart crumbles inside. But you repair it when you're near. I know you like many guys, And that's good. Finally you're attractions Are what they should. I'm not one you like. But I wish I was. But try as I might, I'll never be one because, I just don't got what others do. Don't have what it takes to impress you. -Petey Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't. |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
I really like what you wrote. It almost sounds like something that's been going on in my with for a year now. It's exactly what I feel. Good job! |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
I really like what you wrote. It almost sounds like something that's been going on in my life for a year now. It's exactly what I feel. Good job! |
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