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DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

0 posted 2002-12-22 10:52 PM

make believe with me

Lets pretend this never happened at all
Pretend we havent spoken in years
Pretend we don't really care
Pretend this summer was a dream
Pretend we never needed this to be real
Pretend we dont notice when the other isnt around
Pretend we were never perfect for each other
Pretend we were never connected
Pretend we dont know what it feels like to be in love
Pretend we never touched, never kissed, never looked into each others eyes
Pretend we dont really know each other
Pretend we dont depend on each other
Pretend we were never even good friends
Lets Pretend the dream ended today
Pretend its over
Pretend that dreams cant hurt us
Now lets pretend we can live without each other
And lets pretend Im dead
Make believe because when you make believe
Nothing is real
And when nothing is real
Forgetting is easy

Pretend because underneath it all I know there is nothing left.

Lets make this easy

[This message has been edited by DarkAngelOfTheStars (12-22-2002 10:57 PM).]

jennilynn
Junior Member

since 2002-11-11

Posts 29
here with me

1 posted 2002-12-22 11:06 PM

this is so close to my last relationship its scary. i got all of the feelings in this poem. good write.

~jenni~

"who stepped on your brain?"-my friend Katie

~everything happens for a reason. you just have to figure out what that reason is~

StellarChica
Member

since 2002-07-06

Posts 207
floating down a river...

2 posted 2002-12-22 11:09 PM

"Make believe because when you make believe
Nothing is real
And when nothing is real
Forgetting is easy"

I REALLY liked those lines. This was great. Good job.

*~erin~*

"It's hard to look in the mirror these days when everyone else has everything you'd rather be."-Saves The Day

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

3 posted 2002-12-22 11:32 PM

i liked this, but i didnt really like all the repetition other than that, i liked this a lot.

If You Wanna See A Rainbow, You've Gotta Live Through The Rain. And If You Wanna See Through Love, You've Gotta Live Through The Pain.

DarkAngelOfTheStars
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 255

4 posted 2002-12-23 12:08 PM

yeah im not much for repeating but i think this one called for it.

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