Teen Poetry #6 |
Dedication to my Love |
CloudedDreams Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 210My Fantasy Realm |
This is dedicated to the one who completely turned my life around. Anguish and sorrow I always went through Daily depression was far from new For years I prayed fro something true Then I stumbled across you At first I tried to push you away Thought were another burden to my day But you showed that you had faith And something in me let you stay I know now there's something better That sunlight is breaking the rainy weather And I hope this feeling can last forever.. (Chorus) You helped me find me And what I can truly be Unbound and Beautiful And finally free You changed my life Revived me inside And I can be carefree with you by my side You helped me grow Into something I know That will bring happiness And I love you so I can see a world so clear Everything is so ugly or drear As long as I know you are near All my worries dissappear The look you give with your copper eyes Stir strange feelings deep inside You touch sends jolts through my mind My heatr can finally realize Things are finally better Outside there is perfect weather I KNOW this will last forever (chorus) ....i love you so.... Yes there will be tommorrow, but will you be there to greet it? |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Wow, this was great. I especially liked the way you changed "I know now there's something better That sunlight is breaking the rainy weather And I hope this feeling can last forever.." to "Things are finally better Outside there is perfect weather I KNOW this will last forever" I thought this was a well written poem, and look forward to more. |
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