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rxyfxy04
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 54
lil' town in Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-20 05:29 PM

Emotions run strong
with no destination.
Love lasts forever
in the imagination.

Tempting to the heart,
lovely at a glance,
suspicion in the mind
ready to take the chance.

Don't want to lose
what they already hold.
Would it be the same?
Or would the heart turn cold?

Moments spent together,
the farther they fall.
Taking the next step
is all they saw.

They both experienced
the bond of love.
The only who knew
was the one above.

Sharing their lives
through thick n' thin.
Assuming the future
was their only sin.

Seperation fell in.
They did what they could,
but it took over when
they never thought it would.

Memories become forgotten.
They have moved on.
Wishing they could go back,
but everything's gone.

Love, but wait,
for you never know,
when the one you loved
goes from lover to foe.

RxyFxy04

[This message has been edited by rxyfxy04 (12-20-2002 05:46 PM).]

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

1 posted 2002-12-20 05:51 PM

Nicole, this is pretty good. I like the first too lines......so true. This was very well written.

-Stinky Twinkie-

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2002-12-20 06:23 PM

*gasp* that was soooo good! Wow, "Love lasts forever in the imagination" That wasn't my favorite line, how could I pick one? They're all good, but that line just stood out in my mind.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

rOxXbabY391
Member

since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

3 posted 2002-12-29 05:15 PM

woooooah~> that was DEFINATELY one of my favorites!! i love this line:
"They both experienced
the bond of love.
The only who knew
was the one above."

so0o goood!
~*~eMiLy~*~

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

4 posted 2002-12-29 05:55 PM

I really liked this one. The flow and rhyme was very well done. And its all very true. Nicely done!

*Me*
I'm pasteing my smile back on just to please you... I always knew Elmer's glue was good for something...

HopelessRomanticGuy
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 495
LI, New York

5 posted 2002-12-29 10:55 PM

quote:
Seperation fell in.
They did what they could,
but it took over when
they never thought it would.

That line..... it reflects the events in my life around last christmas so well.... *sigh* Now I'm gonna be all nostalgic..lol. If a certain someone on this site reads this, she'll think so too... well, regardless, the poem was great! Keep on writing! I can relate perfectly to the whole thing. I hope your okay, and you got over the sittuation. If not, I'm sorry, I know how it goes... but it'll get better. Trust me.

"You can't hurt meee!! 'Cause I've got on my cheeeeese helmet!"

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