The Person Staring Back at Me

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Teen Poetry #6

The Person Staring Back at Me

rOxXbabY391
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since 2002-12-14

Posts 71

0 posted 2002-12-20 04:35 PM

First i just wanted to say that this is the last poem im posting.. (not forever just today) sry i kno "SPACE" i kno i kno i kno really but im not gunna be here for alllll christmas break so i figured id post them all right now since i wont be able to for a LONG time!

please dont lock them :-(
It's like I see you in a different way
Walking past you everyday
It's hard to finally truly see,
the person staring back at me
When you're in luv, you see him perfectly
But when you fall out you see him how he was MEANT to be seen
Things are different than they were before
Because for me, you slammed your door
Then I saw things how thye really were

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right."

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2002-12-20 06:18 PM

I really like this poem, especially the part about seeing him as he was meant to be seen. Very good.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change?" -Dishwalla-

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