Teen Poetry #6 |
conquering the pain |
dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
I dont know what to do, all i see is the hurt in you I want you to be like you used to be so free,young and happy, not so caught up in her your heartache no1 can cure she is the one you love the one you think that was sent from above just know, the pain WILL go away even if it isnt as soon as today ------------------------------------------------ hey, this is bout my bro, he has been goin through some hard times w/ this grl so i decided to write a poem bout it "sometimes i just feel like |
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xxxnuttyangelxxx Member
since 2002-12-06
Posts 72New York |
quote-- "your heartache no1 can cure" This line is veryy true. Great poem, I enjoyed it a lot and I hope things get better for your brother if they havent already. keep the good work up Much love shea |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
Awww sam! This was good and sad..I hope things get better for him.. *Allison* "O My love |
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foreverwithyou Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 204Wonderland |
this was true sam i also hope ur bro is feelin better that was a good way to express whut U were feelin ttyl bals ska dot ###CATHY### |
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PoeticGoddessOfDepression Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 439I am everywhere |
You mean Jimenem? lol.. no, no, that wasn't the right thing to say. God, girls suck so bad... ahhh!!! Mandy (her right? lol) always seemed so nice... I'm sorry. I really Am. I hope everything get's better. Good write though, lots of strong lines. Take care, Sara |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was a VERY good poem, I especially liked "all I see is the hurt in you" Hope everything goes well with your brother. . And I don't know him, but I know what he's goin through, I've been there. Did you show him your poem? WinterWren |
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dinky Member
since 2002-10-19
Posts 258 |
hey, thx every1 for replyin i hope my bro feels better soon too. thx for the support and i havent shown him this, i dont fell realy comfortable talkin to him bout really emotional stuff but maybe i will thats a god idea thx and again thx to EVERY1 who replied and merry christmas or if u speak french, joyeux noel ~samantha~ "sometimes i just feel like |
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