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stephanie
Junior Member

since 2002-11-15

Posts 33

0 posted 2002-12-19 10:30 AM

There's a party this weekend.
Aren't you gonna go?
Six kegs and some coolers-
The price is real low.

Five bucks for a cup,
All you can drink.
It starts at ten.
Just sit back and think.

So much fun you can have;
All your friends will be there.
You know you can go;
Your parents wont care.

Just make up a lie;
Say you're staying with Steph,
And when your cell phone rings
Let your ears go deaf.

Everone is going.
They'll be looking for you.
Just give in and go!
You know you want to.

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2002-12-19 05:57 PM

Hmmm...this is an interesting piece! I wonder if you're the same Stephanie I know! *thinks* Spephie-Chan? Hehe...prolly not!

This reminds me alot of me and my friends. Often, to get my ex-girlfriend/close-friend out of the house past cerfew, we'd often say that she's staying at a girl named "Stephanie"'s. Now, "Steph" was on her Rugby team...heheh! We'd often use "Steph" for sleepovers, and parties---she worked out quite nicely!

But yeah, this poem rings quite the bell with me! Nicely done!

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

2 posted 2002-12-19 06:28 PM

I liked this poem a lot. The rythem was good, it flowed nicely. I also like what the poem was about. Its very true =)) Good write . Bye for now

Love, peace and chinken grease
shea

Stinky Twinkie
Member

since 2002-11-26

Posts 204
Dinwiddie

3 posted 2002-12-19 10:23 PM

This one is pretty darn deep, and good. I know I give you a lot of "crap" in class about your poems and what-not, but seriously they're pretty good. You've got a little bit of talent in there somewhere (see, here I go again...). You're poems have something that mine could and will never have: MEANING! Congratulations, I give you an A.

-Stinky Twinkie-

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

4 posted 2002-12-19 11:38 PM

Wow, my name is Stephanie too! Anyway, good poem, I liked the rythm.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

LTEvans
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
Lenham, England

5 posted 2002-12-20 12:00 PM

Great poem. Love the subject matter to.

Solipsism saves us from the atavism of the Equalitarian.

LTEvans

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