Teen Poetry #6 |
Only you |
wvplayernotreally Member
since 2002-11-06
Posts 215yakima wa |
Only you had a strength to fight my fears when I could not Only you held my hand and lifted me when I fell With Your kind eyes you healed my soul With your stong arms you lifted me from the fire and waves and set me free on solid ground Your the only one that could tell me my faults without hurting me You listened to my problems without correcting my every word You soothed the savage beast that rested in my tainted heart I owe my life to you, I couldn't have survived on my own Your love your care or willing spirit Only you could make me the person I am, even with my faults " I think I got a tan from the light in which i was basking." |
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mindy Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 34VA, US |
This is a good poem! I think that it's always nice to write poems to those who help you out in life.Keep writing... |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
That was a truly beautiful poem, wonderfully expressed! I need someone like that! Hope you showed it to whoever it's for, Im sure they'd appreciate it. WinterWren |
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