Teen Poetry #6 |
I wonder |
BrokenAngel Member
since 2002-01-06
Posts 141Puryear, TN, USA |
I wonder How long will you hang your hat up? How long will your boots stay under my bed? How long will you want me around? I wonder If you ment everything you said to me If your touch held more than just wanting a good time If your eyes held anything at all I wonder If I've walked into another dissapointment If I have welcomed another heart break If I have taken a promise that will be broken I wonder If this is really just a dream If I'm going to wake up soon If none of this is real I wonder if you will hurt me I wonder if you will break me I wonder if you will lie to me I wonder if you will leave me behind I wonder if you will be just like all the others I wonder (Deticated to my cowboy Jeremy, please don't hurt me) ~*~*~Night Angel |
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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
Good idea for a poem! I liked reading it. It could be even better if you relate it to a specific event or sumthing.. just a thought! :-D ~*~eMiLy~*~ "I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right. |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
this is really good, I think people whose been hurt in a past relationship often think like this... GREAT WORK! Best Wishes, Brian. |
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roxywrestlegirl04 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 74good ole DINWIDDIE |
i like this ALOT....nice work...keep it up! LIZ live,love,and die...but take RISKS..thatz what makes life worth the living, love worth the heartache,and death the new beginning! |
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hogsandkisses New Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 1 |
I loved this poem! At this point in time that is totlly how I feel about the guy that I'm seeing right now. Keep up the good work! |
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rxyfxy04 Member
since 2002-11-26
Posts 54lil' town in Virginia |
hey.. i really liked this.. ALOT.. i got my heart broken and now i feel this way with a guy im dating now.. so i could really relate to it.. good luck with jeremy! very nice poem!! RxyFxy04 |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
Great poem, I can really relate to it, Im always wondering when I first find someone for a friend or more if they're gonna hurt me in the end too. WinterWren |
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OtherSideOfTheMirror Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 245 |
Good poem. I wonder if you will break me Interesting words. Very good writing about a very common topic, but unique enough to keep reading. |
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