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Avis
Junior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 38
Raleigh, NC, USA

0 posted 2002-12-17 06:39 PM

I am a pair of deep, blue eyes,
And I refuse to blink.
Some will notice that I last
Longer than they think.

I am a pair of deep, blue eyes,
Fixed upon a form.
Another pair of eyes it is-
Dark, green, and warm.

I am a pair of deep, blue eyes,
Not wavering my sight.
Just the hope that eyes peer back
Keeps me staring with all my might.

Written: 12/17/02
Dedication: To the persistent

Peace and Love,
~KEV~

IM me at Tempus Vivo

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2002-12-17 06:50 PM

I thought this was interesting. Nice thoughts in here.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

2 posted 2002-12-17 07:07 PM

This was really good! I like how you always do a dedication after..it adds a little touch and personal relation to your poems..Great job!
*Allison*

"O My love
Please don`t cry
I`ll wash my bloody hands
And well start a new life"
-Good Charlotte

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

3 posted 2002-12-17 08:31 PM

Again I really like this one, especially the last stanza. You really are a very good writer.

WinterWren
"I want you to believe in life. Will you find out who you are too late, to change? -Dishwalla-

xxxnuttyangelxxx
Member

since 2002-12-06

Posts 72
New York

4 posted 2002-12-17 10:17 PM

I liked this poem a lot. I love writing about eyes because eyes can tell so much. This was a great write *as always* =))

shea

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

5 posted 2002-12-21 02:26 AM

Avis~
Excellent! I like this VERY much.
I just really enjoyed the over all feel of this,
and the images it created in my mind.
Very nicely done.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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