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ranita
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0 posted 2002-08-31 07:53 PM



  A TALK WITH GOD

They say the Lord will not give you more than you can take,
but Lord oh Lord I feel like I'm about to break.

Sometimes I just feel like running away,
then I realize I have no other place to stay.

So here I am living in a daze
going through lifes little maze, a small path and a bend
then your at another deadend.
Lord tell me .... what will you next send?

Some days it gets pretty bad
people dont understand why I look so sad.

They tell me .. keep your head up everything will be okay
just take it easy live day by day.

I know they care and its probably true
but I cant help feeling so blue.

I will not run away !!
instead to you Lord I pray...
please help me and show me the way....

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just out of reach
1 posted 2002-08-31 07:58 PM


All you have to do is ask. I have, and He has shown me the way - believe me. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2002-08-31 08:05 PM



Yes, I would listen to Chris as well,
she has some good advice.

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3 posted 2002-08-31 08:40 PM




(smiles) Yes, follow Chris's advice, all you must do is ask and God will always guide you with His true gentle love! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ranita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2002-08-31 10:48 PM


By keeping the lines of communication open with God through praying, you will get your answers. Too often in times of loneliness and pain, people turn away from the very life line they need--God.

Keep the faith
Linda

Neeraja
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5 posted 2002-09-01 06:40 AM


I know the feeling... keep praying Ranita!!!

Sometimes I would like to hide
on an Island called 'forgetfulness'



Neeraja

Kethry
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6 posted 2002-09-01 08:44 AM


I'm a big believer in the "ASK" principle.
Ask - and it shall be given to you
Seek - and you shall find
Knock  - and the door shall be opened to you.
good poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-09-01 10:14 AM


ranita
A nice write and a good read, enjoyed

Zall
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8 posted 2002-09-02 06:30 PM


Nice work ranita,

To live without faith is no life at all,

Touched me this one,

Aaron

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9 posted 2002-09-16 11:27 AM


we've all had this talk, good write, something we need to remember
Ceinwyn
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10 posted 2002-09-16 03:53 PM


Have you been reading my thoughts or journals of late!? hehe no seriously..I relate a 110 % with this...I tend to run but I see no need..he never runs out on us yanno..sweet poem..enjoyed and gave me much to think about..Thanks for sharing!

Kristen

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

geenabee
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11 posted 2002-09-16 03:57 PM


Dear ranita,
don't be discouraged by life's pitfalls.
God will never let you down if you serve him well, and sadness is part of his big program.  Despair is a tool the Devil wields with skill.  I hope all gets better, and may your experiences here be a ray of sunshine on a cloudy day.

God Bless You,
Geenabee

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