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ranita Junior Member
since 2002-08-31
Posts 15 |
HAVE YOU EVER WONDERED have you ever wondered how different it would be if you had taken that special walk in the park with me i wanted it ever so much your hand in mine, to feel you gentle touch would we be closer then we are my wonderful friend from a far could there have been a spark between you and me? maybe one day we will see if you are my destiny ....... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Ranita, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I too wish this special walk to come true for you very soon as I know it will happen for you and for you both to feel that special spark of joy and comfort! (sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ranita, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely, lovely, especially the summation in the last line, filled with hope very romantic Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ranita - so he missed that walk in the park. I don't believe I would have... BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ranita~ Welcome to Passions~ A lovely, wistful write~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great poem. |
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