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MISS TUCK (a rewrite to make Mistletoe happy))
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MISS TUCK (a rewrite to make Mistletoe happy)) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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I added a verse so that dear, gentle Mistletoe would have the happy ending he wanted. Little Miss Tuck, lost her duck And feared something did eat it She searched all day Then with dismay Grabbed her things and beat it! When she got home, she suddenly groaned "I miss my little duck!" So back she went And was Hell-bent But had no better luck! She was so sad, and was near mad Her friends pitched in as backers They searched all night But still no sight And poor Miss Tuck went "quackers"! Again next day, she made her way Back to the place she lost it The poor Miss Tuck, soon found her duck Then locked it in her closet! -----Noah, At least the duck will be safe now! Ha! Ha! Love, Light & Laughter Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-31-2002 12:39 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I have been updating my replies to all of your wonderful comments to my poems. Take a looksee if you will---there may be something there for those who have previously dared to read my poetry! Sorry that I've been a bit lax in this area. I'll try to keep up with them from now on. Love to you all! Love, Light & Laughter Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (08-31-2002 12:55 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 and  (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, I suppose it's happier, but still the poor ducky is incarcerated in the dark closet! (shows another pouty face) LOL! I just love your wonderful poems, sweet friend, you always delight my day even if your poems make me cry, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah, I'm pleased that you are at least somewhat pleased with the new ending! Your LOL meant alot! Ha! Ha! Ha! LLL L |
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