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brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

0 posted 2002-08-30 06:38 PM

I would like to thank all my friends who have supported at passions, for your friendship and kindness I am eternally grateful.

I tried to finish this poem but my muse has decided
to take some time out, so for some closure I am posting this.
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The mist in permanence
Descends on parallel foliage
Of Oak, Ash and Sycamore;
Barren mothers of a thousand arms,
Offer no resistance against
The shrilling southern shore;
Carrion Rooks pillaging force.
Their Feathered thunder crashes
To mere whispers on my lips,
Tied together in strained reunion
With my bride of wild divorce.

The sum of the angles of that rectangle is too monstrous to contemplate!

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-08-30 06:39 PM

I like this piece of work

Cold hands means a warm heart

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2002-08-30 09:02 PM

Heck with the closure! Sweet talk that muse and get yourself back here! And if she won't listen to the sweet talk, then visit the archives and pleasure us with some treasured gems....

as for this? Yet...another

Inuwindow
Junior Member

since 2002-08-29

Posts 12

3 posted 2002-08-30 09:08 PM

I've seen muses come, and I've seen muses go, but I've never seen one divorced before. Looks like you put a lot of thought into the writing of this poem. Thanks for this deep thought tonight.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

4 posted 2002-08-31 08:26 AM

Hey Bri...long time, no...anything. Hugs.

Sigh - divorced muse eh? I doubt it...I think separation will prove to be more appropriate - you just wait and see, I am after all highly psychic (hahahaha)...

Hell, I myself am going through a very messy separation with my own muse, I'm attempting reconciliation tonight - the muse is off sulking while I'm in here, reading the result of other's interactions with their own muses...rotf...

poem is interesting...that's the word that came to mind, interesting...and kinda sad to me...

Hope all is well in the land of the animator...

big squishy smiles..

K

Tammy Blessing
Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 366
PA

5 posted 2002-08-31 08:42 AM

Sorry about the muse...I may have stole her. My own was missing for over a YEAR...until I happened by this place and was inspired by all the wonderful people in it... Gosh I REALLY hope that wasn't YOUR muse that came to help me..I'll just have to ask her. Believe me...if it IS she, I'll send her scampering right back home to you!!
Peace,love,light and happiness
TAmmy

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

6 posted 2002-08-31 10:10 AM

quote:
Their Feathered thunder crashes
To mere whispers on my lips,

[and]

Barren mothers of a thousand arms

brian...
your assonance is showing.
your alliteration is glowing.
your imagery's in symmetry.
your muse is flowing.

love it!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2002-08-31 10:36 AM

hi brian

your muse speaks well for being gone...maybe I will kick mine out for awhile. More please!!!!

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2002-09-01 05:23 PM

Brian,
a barren write but too beautiful to let disappear easily. I hope it is the same with your muse.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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