Open Poetry #22 |
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Winterscape, for Lauren's challenge |
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Sunshine
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Winterscape, for Lauren ![]() Let our imaginations play Through the frost of sunny day Let us stroll among the green Now bowed in white, beauteous scene ![]() Feel the crisp! Of air so clear Let me cuddle to you, dear, And watch our breath in misty gleam About our faces, in crystal sheen ![]() Around us now, all does sleep Except this love, by which we keep Warm in hearts, in flames, transpires To melt us thus, in our desires ![]() Our summer days, behind us, so, But in our hearts, a candle glows ~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Goosebumps! Your words gave me goosebumps on a late summer, very warm morning. Beautiful Karilea...and loved the pics as well. Challenge well met...I must take a look see. ~Hugs~ |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
You present us with a multimedia feast, Lovely pictures and fine verse. Gloom |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ Beautiful and so serene....I LOVE those pictures....I am looking forward to winter, and the beauty it brings....thank you for sharing this.... ![]() Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely, and since we are experiencing 90 to 100+ days, it's a cooling way to begin the morning. Aside from the welcome thoughts of cool...it is a fantastic poem, winter scenes with wondrous love mixed in...WONDERFUL! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sunshine
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Thanks, everyone. Ever since I figured out how to size my own photos, it's been heaven putting them with my own words...something I have been want to do for a long time. It is now reviving my love of photography... and thank You, Lauren, for the wonderful challenge! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-14-2002 11:53 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Not only is this beautiful, but the graphics are awesome. Well done Karilea....*s* somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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bsquirrel![]()
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I love your smile! And your words. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
![]() I pass this way but once, here's hoping I meet you. |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
Wow. And all the pictures too. What was the challenge? |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, this is beautiful, though I love the summer I also admire those special winter days around Christmas where families cuddle up together and share and give! (sigh) This is a wonderful portrait of beauty, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Swooooon ![]() |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Christmas in July! Er, close enough anyway *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Winter in August... Is that wishful thinking, Karilea? I know its hot...but... you wrote a beautiful poem. I love the pics also.... ![]() Lyra |
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Sunshine
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You folks are absolutely precious! Thank goodness for Ron's home, where we display our word play... |
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