Open Poetry #22 |
Toe Surgery |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I had toe surgery It was a pain They thought they numbed my toe all the way To find when they were cutting They had not It was so painful I kicked the doctor off He grabbed my foot And stuck the needle in He pulled it out Started to cut again I swear to GOD I will never go To him again Cold hands means a warm heart |
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ThunderMage Senior Member
since 2002-06-20
Posts 812Canada |
Ouch! Let me deal with him. What is life without poetry and adventure? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Believe you me, I would have made sure you were frozen to absolute zero degrees---but then again, your foot would shatter when the scalpel began to cut into your brittle flesh! ---but at least you wouldn't feel any pain! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I can't quite put my finger on it..but something about this poem gives me the chills?..... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It gives me the chills, too... and a resolve to keep my lil piggies away from knives! LOL This sounds like an awful experience, loner... hope you're better now! |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
i never knew toe surgery to be so poetic. /jen/ i'm so bitterly disappointed. betty, i think it's time you leave now. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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