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the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

0 posted 2002-08-30 12:34 PM


I had toe surgery
It was a pain
They thought they numbed my toe all the way
To find when they were cutting
They had not
It was so painful
I kicked the doctor off
He grabbed my foot
And stuck the needle in
He pulled it out
Started to cut again
I swear to GOD
I will never go
To him again

Cold hands means a warm heart

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ThunderMage
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since 2002-06-20
Posts 812
Canada
1 posted 2002-08-30 02:23 PM


Ouch! Let me deal with him.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2002-08-30 02:45 PM


Believe you me, I would have made sure you were frozen to absolute zero degrees---but then again, your foot would shatter when the scalpel began to cut into your brittle flesh! ---but at least you wouldn't feel any pain!

Love, Light & Laughter
Linda

Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2002-08-30 04:52 PM


I can't quite put my finger on it..but something about this poem gives me the chills?.....
suthern
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4 posted 2002-08-30 05:14 PM


It gives me the chills, too... and a resolve to keep my lil piggies away from knives! LOL

This sounds like an awful experience, loner... hope you're better now!

quietlydying
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the wonderful land of oz
5 posted 2002-11-19 06:28 PM


i never knew toe surgery to be so poetic.

/jen/

i'm so bitterly disappointed.  betty, i think it's time you leave now.

Artic Wind
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6 posted 2007-11-11 01:15 PM


enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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