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The Story (by my 13 yr old son)
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The Story (by my 13 yr old son) |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA 
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The Story Once upon a time there was this guy, Who on Calvery was hung so high, and on His head the thorns he wore, So we would have sin no more, He died up on the cross that day, The day he took all sins away, So that was how the story went, When on that day a GREAT life was spent. Copyright 8/14/02:Andrew Bryan Miller age 13 I thought he did VERY well. This is his first ever poem. I am such a proud ma ma right now  LITL, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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everafterhim Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 24Ohio, Pioneer |
All right Andrew. Way to go. Keep it up. You have talent there. Even Uncle Bill was impressed. Tons of Love, Aunt Tina |
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Heather Miller Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 409Bryan, Ohio USA |
Andrew is pretty shy about this Aunt Tina Every time I tell him that someone else likes it he gets all red in the face The Proud ma ma, Heather Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...this guy sounds a lot like Jesus...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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