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It Dials upon my Heart
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It Dials upon my Heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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It Dials Upon My Heart Tracing sunlight’s fleeing night Weaving dreams of echoes flight. Full of fancy, phantoms wile Dialing to my mind in guile. Arcing sparks to simmer start Brushing strokes of abstract art. Filled with rush and lush and dear Unbalance my middle ear. Leaves me prone unable to chase The silver gold that weaves the lace With heart and eye upon the sky. I lay in bed and cannot fly. I would follow the sunlight brace To where ever this unknown place And see the wonders of this glean To walk among its garden green I would unlock dementia’s more And peek beyond our censures door. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
beautiful echoes in hearts ringing tone Within dream palettes reflecting Seymour you are not alone Hope |
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secretlife Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359Grean Earth ,,, |
Lovely? I like it.. Secretlife, (Easy come,,Easy go) |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
This is fantastic Sigh....Women are always "dialing" on my heart....(It's usually the wrong number, or they say: "Hello, is this the party to which I'm speaking?"....then, "Who do you have your long distance carrier with?"...or, "Could I ask what interest rate you have on your home?"....) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS, I know dear and thank you. Secertlife, Thank you for the lovely. Toe, LOL I get those calls too. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am a dream weaver Sy..I just don't expose it anymore. always a nice flow to your words. M |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Those prone moments are happening a lot more frequently here, too, Sy  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Arcing sparks to simmer start Brushing strokes of abstract art. Filled with rush and lush and dear Unbalance my middle ear. Leaves me prone unable to chase The silver gold that weaves the lace With heart and eye upon the sky. I lay in bed and cannot fly. ================================= You are just calling the wrong number.... next time call 555-winkiewinkie ask for Tinkerbell Filled with rush and lush and dear Unbalance my middle ear. youre so coool  Read your own poetry aloud...you'll hear the balance...you give that to us each day.    |
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Zall Member
since 2002-08-25
Posts 214London, England |
Again great piece |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy The silver gold that weaves the lace is found within a profound place its colored with an artist's eye whose poetry like name is Sy  |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
for some odd reason the use of brushes and arc made me think of electrical generators. weird huh, but as always I have to stop and read your words as they are always worth the time. J |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Another lovely morning offering from a dear gentle man. thanks Seymour!! Chris  Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is simply beautiful, Sy. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 As the mist leaves from the dawn and the dew dries upon the lawn see soft shine upon thy face feel the warmth of Sun's embrace... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, I noticed, thank you. Balladeer, Didn't I tell you it's catching. JM, 555-winkiewinkie Now it's out of the bag. Everyone can call. WWRS  Zall, Thank you. Martie, James, Thank you sir. Nightshade, You are welcome Chris. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I feel it, I feel it, |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart this is brilliant writing and such a beautiful flow as always, your daily touch upon this page always rings my bell. Sunlight seeks to illume your eyes Glisten in their hopeful sighs But with the night I shall appear Called to soothe away your fear I’m summoned by your phantom call Dialled to wander in soul’s hall Run through the vales of poetry In the mind of what could be Let go of thoughts and feel the zing Cede to the charms that I bring Over the keys that lead to me Run your fingers so lightly And link your soul to mine in this Receive my electric kiss I really love this you excel at writing the delights in the morning. i love it utterly utterly utterly As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, Once again I enjoyed your poem and responce to my dialing. You are a wonder of recite. Be well and I thank you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I would follow the sunlight brace To where ever this unknown place And see the wonders of this glean To walk among its garden green I would unlock dementia’s more And peek beyond our censures door." (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Seymour, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, every morning may you rise before that sun and find your spirit slowly soaring from your wisdows walk all upon the graceful wind! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I looked beyond the censure's door and behind dementia's moor I found that always, when I roam I think of you; come back to home. Stunning write, you're prone to do that. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, I always enjoy your repies. Keth, Now that's what I call a lovely comment. |
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