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Bon-Bon of the Mind
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Bon-Bon of the Mind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Bon-bon of the Mind My mind is on a scavenge binge The ginger ale of challenge fringe The gnosis of osmosis sweep Fills my heart with tears of weep. Although it lives in sands gone by Yet thoughts of it still sear my eyes. And floods my mind with tidal turn For things I cannot have and yearn. The merry-go-round goes round The horses go up and down And I am laughing in delight For I am the great white knight It is the magic of our youth For that I have a real sweet tooth. And I revisit in my mind All the bon- bon I can find So please forgive this zen old man And I’ll be with you when I can. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
It is the magic of our youth For that I have a real sweet tooth. And I revisit in my mind All the bon- bon I can find ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I'm with ya, and I Love it!  Deb |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'The gnosis of osmosis sweep' Only you .... could offer this 'bon-bon'~ A tasty word-swallow~ Thank you~ *Hugs*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning great white knight! What a mouthful of sweetness this is! You know I love this don't you Sy? Sure do! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like my bon-bons chilled to bone and yet, if you would have me roam along with you on thoughts of weep still these treasures I shall keep |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
smooooooth stuff sir sy cocoa covered golf balls done right |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Very nice Sy. A lovely, sweet read over well place words. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My mind is on a scavenge binge The ginger ale of challenge fringe ============================ and those will be my waaaay cool lines for the day.  The way your mind works and the way your muse flows, never ceases to open my eyes and to make me smile at your wile. The way you string words to create these gem of pen poems always leaves us with a lesson of life and of heart. Zen poet...poetic prophet...Sy-babers ... all the same in my book. The gnosis of osmosis sweep yeah...yer so cool. *WW*   |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart only you could have written this, such sweet simplicity and such perfectly written beauty, Truly gorgeous writing darling heart I love it utterly. Once again you weave magic and once again I’m awed, there are, even as I write this, poets gnashing their teeth in fury that they cannot ever write even once, with the skill you bring to this place day after day. You write the most amazing lines, the whole of your poems flow with wonder. I know I say it day after day but you are without a single doubt one of the best writers here, if not anywhere. Seymour lifts his pen and the world pauses to inhale the sweet wisdom and touch of you. YOU know I love this utterly utterly utterly, don’t you? This is exquisite writing truly exquisite   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BloomingRose, Thank you Deb. Marge, Only trying to keep up with you. Nancy, Hugs and back.Sunshine, I'm touched by your sun, DS, Recieved some chocolate golf ball lately. That must have been it. WhiteRose, Thank you sweet. JM, Well you are part of my gnosic thinking, WWRS Marsha, Your utterly is my completness. Thank you sweet. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is one of my favorites of yours yet, I LOVE IT, yes, always cherish the candy of the child inside you for you truly are our White Knight I officially proclaim! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
DO NOT EAT another one.....save them for me.. Are we struggling my friend, Sir Sy? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you for the nice comment. Magnus, I'll save some for you. Thanks for the read. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It is the magic of our youth For that I have a real sweet tooth. And I revisit in my mind All the bon- bon I can find A lovely write, Sy... Can I have some bon- bon please?  ~ hugs from chipmunk with sweet toothLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, I promise to save you some. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
the ending just...is amazing! I don't know how I missed this one but I'm glad I went back in the pages and caught it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing shadows I thought this was gone like candy, thanks for the read. |
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