Open Poetry #22 |
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Evening Tears Won't Last Forever |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada ![]() |
![]() ~* Evening Tears Won't Last Forever *~ ~* Play Love Born On Angel Wings *~ Your storms won't last forever nor will clouds forever block your sun. Evening tears are but a blanket softly masking times to come. Yon fog is merely tired rain wishing to rest upon the ground. Raindrops on the windowsill are heaven’s tears you’ve found. Sad tears won't last a lifetime as they trickle down your face releasing pain imprisoned soon their passage will erase. Being alone seems like infinity, in despair you’ll dance a while, but love has a way before you know singing a song that makes you smile. Crystal winter coldness wraps the trees barren branches stripped of green. Yet, spring restores their beauty, nature once again becomes serene. Our forever only lasts as long as our time on earth will allow, but eternity is forever, so enjoy your here and now. Immortality's a human quest we pray, someday to find. It’s been there all along in faith of God if we'd accept that in our mind. The rain won't last forever, and the clouds won't steal the sun. Each dawn awakens sleeping dreams into a new day that's just begun. No, storms won't last forever nor will clouds forever block the sun evening tears are but a blanket softly masking times to come. ~*~ midi: "Love Born On Angel Wings - Bruce DeBoeur http://www.brucedeboer.net/ graphic: Mysteria's Muse http://mysteriasmuse.netpoets.net/ The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it. Sharon ![]() [This message has been edited by Mysteria (08-28-2002 10:57 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So true. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon, This is a lovely write and you have talent my girl. And I don't know how you keep up that fast pace. But whatever we love you. ![]() |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
hi sweet lady, This is very lovely, soft and filled with compassion. A very poignant read that I just loved big hugs ![]() Cher(Koko) Poetry is: |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"No, storms won't last forever nor will clouds forever block the sun evening tears are but a blanket softly masking times to come." Ahhhhh ... Sharon ... whomever you wrote this for, you can add me to your list. Just what the doctor ordered, my wisdom-filled friend. This had a lovely flow to it, and I loved the phrasing and images throughout. Beautifully written! ![]() Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is soooooo beautifully compassionate and being a witness to all this sorrow and now escaping it I believe in your thoughts with all my heart! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The rain won't last forever, and the clouds won't steal the sun. Each dawn awakens sleeping dreams into a new day that's just begun. No, storms won't last forever nor will clouds forever block the sun evening tears are but a blanket softly masking times to come. ==================================== Sharon your rhymes are lovely... made even more so that they are meant to comfort and lift a friend in a time of need. A touching write of tender wisdoms and kind intentions. ![]() In the space between now and then |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Seems you've got that da dum thing down pat dear friend ![]() |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely and a precious picture too!! Enjoyed. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ah...but you see, if you needed this, then you were the friend it was meant for! ThisDiamond ~ Thank you for you kindness. Seymour ~ ![]() Cheri ~ Oh so good to see your name again ![]() Kit ~ But you are always on my list, always. Noah ~ Anyone ever tell you how wonderful you are? Ruth ~ You are kidding me right? Now this one took a while to do, maybe that's the secret ~ don't rush the darn thing? ![]() Janet Marie ~ Ah hah! caught you sneaking in. Nightshade ~ Thank you for your encouragement, I really appreciate it. [This message has been edited by Mysteria (08-28-2002 08:35 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have never seen such a beautiful poem. How grateful am I to know such a talented poetess....I write this through tears...this is, perhaps, one of the most beautiful poems I have ever seen...truly...a Keeper of the First Magnitude, and I am sorry, that I do not have a smilie face to depict the gratitude that this poem gives me at this very moment............................. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-29-2002 06:41 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Mysteria - this is a stunning graphic. And a most touching beautiful poem... BC |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sunshine ~ But you see I am here there with you ![]() Bill ~ Well it was for a very elegant lady and thank you for your kind words. (email when you are coming to the island if you see this okay?) |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful words to compliment a stunning picture. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sharon, =============== Yon fog is merely tired rain wishing to rest upon the ground. Raindrops on the windowsill are heaven’s tears you’ve found. The rain won't last forever, and the clouds won't steal the sun. Each dawn awakens sleeping dreams into a new day that's just begun. ================= Aw dear friend, if it's all the same with you I am putting this in my scrapbook of Ginger's poetry! Karilea isn't the only one responding through tears. This is a gift of significant power. Bless you. ![]() If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (08-29-2002 12:58 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This poem has it all---visually, musically, and with a richness of rhyme and verse. A totally enchanting experience. Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sharon not only are your words perfect to form but so very touching and meaningful. These words come at a time when they were so very much needed to hear, to be felt...... to remind..... They have touched me in ways I can not explain, so I will just say Thank you..... If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I had to had my praise with all the others. This is a beautiful, thought inspired piece. One of your best, I think! ![]() Kitty |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sharon This is fabulous in every way! |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue ~ Thank you for reading this one. Larry ~ I am truly honored you think this worthy. EarthAngel ~ Hope you are one? I love earth angels and thank you for reading. Kitty ~ Are you Miss Kitty from Starlite? If you are welcome and am going to read every single you thing of yours ![]() Martie ~ From you - this is a real compliment I shall treasure. |
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