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Hymn of Grace....inspired by ShadowRider's Lambs of Peace
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Hymn of Grace....inspired by ShadowRider's Lambs of Peace |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Hymn of Grace It frightens me the flow the go of it in red wet dirt Stop Too fast the hate can’t wait to take I see a fist rising from the nest where babies are blessed How many quiet voices know how to sing If music could bring Peace Peace the song to world a hymn of grace |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - your words say volumes - my hope is that people thinking these words will get through to our country's leadership and they would think with grace and love and peace and not egos, hatred, getting even, etc. Let's all raise our voices in hymn's of peace and grace - Paul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Martie, Excellent. The fist waiting to kill or caress? Mike |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
One word: Awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Martie, I wish with all my heart we can speak more like the innocent children we all were and with that love establish a true harmony for everyone, this is so very true and my heart prays for this relief to come! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Dark Star on each bright face of every star is a dark side that knows not the Lambs of Peace and the Hymns of Grace I am flattered, honored, and in awe of your power words, today Martie! jeff [This message has been edited by ShadowRider (08-28-2002 08:26 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ Poignant piece~ You do 'inspire' so gracefully~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Our lady of peace and prayer...Certainly you have achieved this fame... Well done Martie! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A lovely companion piece to Jeff's poem, Martie... So very well written...  ~ hugs of peace from a pesky rodentLyra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I like the thoughts and the flow, but I get confused on the lines including the second "Peace" and remaining. Could you help me? I know I'm the only one, by the other comments. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words always flow beautifully... hugss M |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Unusual penning from you M...I like it though, it never pays to stay static in one's writing... hugs...  K |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now I must read Shadowrider's post...if it is as marvelous as this, it too shall be deemed a  Sorry I wasn't here earlier...it's been a busy week! |
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