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Uneven Daisy
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Uneven Daisy |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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You play with my heart as a flower To love me or love me not When all I can do is to hope It's an uneven daisy you've got A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Krishankins - you write these short ones very well... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Oh Kristopher, this is so powerfully said, sweet friend, it is indeed kind of dangerous to love someone like that and I wish for your heart to forever be filled with flowers of daisies left basking in trust and joy and comfort! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
Superb!!! Another fantastic, fantastic piece. Sincerely, Titus "I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come." |
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PoetryIsLife
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
*bump* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sad but hopeful...helen |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Don't think of yourself as a blossom There's more than one bud that you've got And if she's just counting your petals Then tell her the plan's gone to pot |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
like this one lots! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh yes, this is just how I feel, many days. Excellent write, Kris. Sandra |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Nature, in all its imperfections and breathtaking glory, is captured so well here, krishankins. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Krishankins Short and sweet, well done. |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
Smile.... well done Kris!!! Neeraja |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
well done Kris and very enjoyed. *s* somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely fabulous, as usual. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
When all I can do is to hope It's an uneven daisy you've got Now, that is a cool line! Love brevity. Ya do it VERY well. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gotta send this one through again....sorry  |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Concurrng with Duncan - good brevity. That's one of the things I do, squeeze emotion into sparse lines, or lines that seem to lack emotion - it isn't all that easy is it? Hmm...haven't read you before...I'll be keeping my eye out..  K |
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