Open Poetry #22 |
The MAGIC MIRROR |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My grandma's antique dresser, It had a magic mirror, And I became a princess When into it I'd peer. When I went to Grandma's house, The first place that I'd go, Was up the winding staircase, Far above the world below. I'd creep along the corridor, Floorboards creaking all the way, Heading for my secret room, So near, yet far away. The heavy door swung open As I pushed it far and wide, I'd feel myself changing As I ventured forth inside. The mirror stood in the corner, Atop a dressr of ebony, Neglected and long forgotten, By others, but not by me. I'd twirl around and sing a song As my dress turned into silk, Drab brown hair became golden curls And my skin as fair as milk. As I gazed into the mirror, A castle came to view, Turrets reaching upward Into a sky so blue. 'Twas in this magic kingdom That my charming prince did rule, Some day he'd take me out of My world so cold and cruel. Upon a golden stallion, He'd charge forth and carry me, Back to his land of sunshine Where I'd finally be free |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
To be a child one more time and say "hey, let's pretend...." well done. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Cute, with a nostalgic ache. Mike |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Very cute Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Linda, this is soooooo beautifully bittersweet, sweet friend, I hope now true happiness fills your heart as you are so deserving of it! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful innocent ramble, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing! Mayn love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EarthAngel~ You too ??? Oh ... how I hope that someday my daughter or my granddaughter will have the same wonderful memories of peering into my dresser mirror~ Wonderfully nostalgic piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Earth Angel - you took me back in time with this one. I could see you climbing the stairs to look into that magic mirror... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I'm so pleased that you have all responded so positively to my poem. Whenever I read it I am intoxicated with a sense of nostalgia. Fortunate am I to have had such wonderfully magical memories of my visits to Grandma's house! Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Oh Linda!! You've done it again. Brought me to tears with this one you did. I can't say enough to express how wonderful I think you are. May the child in you remain always.. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Would ya settle for a fairly dashing Toerag on a camel?.....Okay, how about a sissy Prince name Balladeer on a jackass?....Okay, how about just writing some more of this class poetry? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am honestly honoured (I just love alliteraion!) by your warm responses to a poem that is near and dear to my heart. A tear wells up in my eyes as well when I remember myself as that little girl. In fact she still resides in my heart and I talk to her often. I would welcome you to visit another poem of mine "Summer Days" that can transport you back to those magical days of your childhood. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Linda, this is a wonderful memory of your visits to your grandma'shouse. I sure wish I had had a grandma to leave me with such wonderful memories. I use to feel a little envious of other kids who had grandma's to visit. |
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