Open Poetry #22 |
Let Nature Love |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
I need~ the warmth of sun the cool of moon the sigh of wind loves soft touch upon my skin awaken me embrace my heart. Let me bathe in morning dew let the kiss of butterfly touch light upon my face let the orchid cover me in royal of purple let the forest shade with gray. Let nature love~ surround my heart. I need~ the warmth of sun the cool of moon the sigh of wind loves soft touch upon my skin. WhiteRose I said so softly |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
A very soft and soothing read. Enjoyed. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yes, soft and soothing and don't we all need those things, even if we don't think so. I like the progressive movement of this with an ever so slight ebb now and then. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A simple request, sometimes, so hard to meet... Nice Write! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
WhiteRose A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rose of White ~ MAY YOU HAVE "the warmth of sun the cool of moon the sigh of wind loves soft touch upon (your) skin" ~ EA |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
LOVELY! If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I believe it found its place ... with just the right touch. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Thank you all very much. I thought this one would have slipped into oblivion by now. It was nice to come here and see it again. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is absolutely stunning; I love it's soft touch and we all need to experience the joy of these things. Great job of writing. Hugs, Marti Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away. [This message has been edited by NewEnglandlazurlu (10-09-2002 12:50 PM).] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Me too...James |
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