Alive (For My Love Joanna)

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

0 posted 2002-10-08 11:02 PM

(For you, my sweetheart of heaven! )

Alive
By: Noah Eaton
10/8/02

You fly into my dreams
Sharing with you a first kiss so sweet
And when I feel our hearts beat
Together lovingly
I feel so alive...

How could you do a thing like that to me?
How do you melt my heart so easily?
I don't care if I feel crazy
Because with you I'm happy
I'm alive...

When I feel your warm breath inside my mouth
Gently tasting your candy tongue on heavens clouds
I close my eyes and hear your heart sing aloud
Feeling your heavens pouring out
Knowing you're alive...
You're alive...

We both make up an intricate balance of life
And when your fingers are intertwined with mine
You coo like La Chaconne d'Amadis, make me fly like a kite
My Apotheosis, my angels sigh
You make me feel alive

When I see your body glow in the golden dawn
You hair scattered about, your smile turning me on
I caress your gorgeous caramel mocha face I dote upon
Your eyes cast loves tears from your magicians magic wand
We're alive...

And when I hold your hand
Staring in your pair of angel eyes so grand
I whisper "I love you Joanna!"
Feeling your heart beat with mine, I know what I am
Alive...

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-08-2002 11:09 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-10-08 11:04 PM

Beautiful as usual Noah

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2002-10-08 11:11 PM

Noah - they sure know how to do these things, don't they? I wonder how they do it sometimes, perhaps it's magic, or something...

BC

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-10-09 02:15 AM

AAAWWWWW, Noah, this is S0000000 beautiful. Why don't you make it into a song? I'm sure that Joanna would love to hear you sing it to her. This made me even more lonesome for my Gary. Lord, I'll be glad when this weekend gets here so we can be together. You know what? I wish that everybody could find this special kind of love that I have with Gary and that you have with Joanna. It would make the world such a happier place. Best wishes to you and your love, Noah.

Love To All,
Ethel....Garys Lady...garysgirl

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

4 posted 2002-10-09 10:25 AM

Noah, this is so happy and upbeat that it makes me want to dance with a lighthearted heart.

Now go to your Joanna and dance with her.

Hugs, Marti

Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-10-09 11:07 AM

"When I feel your warm breath inside my mouth, gently tasting your candy tongue on heavens clouds..."---this is so s-e-n-s-o-u-s

One cannot help but feel "alive" when one reads a love poem such as this! Noah, you are incredible!

Linda

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas