Open Poetry #22 |
Time Again |
WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Tomorrow he'll come the shadow comes too We'll pretend of course we always do He'll hold me close I'll sigh a lot. I'll think I'm special he'll remind I'm not. At first some love will share the space. One day, maybe two I'll see that face. Disappointment obvious when comes day three. By the fourth day the hatred I'll see. Then another month I'll wait again. My God when does the punishment end. WhiteRose I said so softly |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Maybe it ends when you find a different lover, one who reminds you how special you are, not how special you aren't? |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
This is a sad piece, WR. I hope warm smiles and better days find you soon. Nice Job!! A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Excellent write...sad though...and I do hope that it ain't about you....cause maybe it is time to go looking for something that is cooking....not cold in the freezer... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Nice job Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A really nice write, Anne... but y'know... its a big world out there, and as my mother always used to say... theres a lot of fish in the sea... Maybe you ought to go fishing!!! ~ hugs from a fishy chipmunk Lyra |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
What can I say. All of your comments and concern is appreciated. This place is now a refuge and I can't tell you how much you all mean to me. I will only say this. Tis not so easy after 14 years. And the angel, my sweet Ashley, well for her I'd do anything. Enough said. Again, thank you all. [This message has been edited by WhiteRose (08-29-2002 09:42 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Anne, I'm so sorry you feel this way but hope now everything is alright and you have found your lcky catch! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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