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Which way to look... (edited)
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Which way to look... (edited) |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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look up look way up look way, way up see the faces painted on Sistine Chapel ceilings? smile, there is an all pervasive presence. look down look way down look way, way down see the clown about to frown spotted the hole to Earth's center.... that smile turned upside down holes to our core... tough to enter. look right and left at crosswalks look both ways, then venture after sets of teeth come dentures babes flex flacid legs.. soon crawl hoist themselves precariously at first... not long after looks in all directions lose their connections before the fall. look up look down look right and left now that you've looked...see. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (08-28-2002 01:13 AM).] |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
look up look down look right and left now that you've looked...see See being the operative word. So many see not at all. Great read. Enjoyed. I said so softly |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Most people just "look" at life and what is phyically around them, but you, dear poet, are one of the observers of life who "sees" beyond the obvious. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Hello Earth, yes I tend to dig and fish for the unforgiving....rarely do I write light poems. Thanks for sharing. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
White Rose, quite right..just as many don't say what they should and listen to what they'd like to hear  |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Too often we look but do not see and hear but do not listen. Thanks for "seeing" and writing such wonderful poetry to help us all do the same. Peace,love,light and happiness Tammy |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is really cool, Martin... You've really highlighted the difference between looking and seeing.  ~ hugs from a chipmunk who is lookingLyra |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
there is a lot more about false visions, I'd like to keep for later  thanks for sharing . |
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