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Silent Screaming
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Silent Screaming |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA 
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Silent Screaming Know my heart is silent screaming Know my past is heartfelt leaning Know my body aches for loss Know I've paid such a cost Know I"ve felt pain and glory Know mine is but ONE story Know my pain is not your own Know my heart is all alone Know my past is future creeping Know my dreams are future sleeping Know my heart is silent screaming As past is present, still unseeing |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is awesome Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very well done, Tammy... I read it aloud and it almost sounded like a chant...  ~ hugs from the chanting chipmunkLyra |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Vibrant write my friend. All eases in the dawn of loving ourselves. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tammy~ I felt the emotion in this piece~ 'Know my dreams are future sleeping' And when the dreams awaken ... they'll make a mighty sound~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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CSKpoet Senior Member
since 2002-07-12
Posts 845Island in Paradise |
Yes a chant of pain and need to bbe understood..very nice write Cher Poetry is: |
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Moonlight Romeo
since 2001-09-10
Posts 982The heart of you |
It is probably better that we don't know the future, we would probably scream louder then. Thank you. What light through yon window breaks? It is the east, and Juliet is the sun. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I "Know" one thing for sure, I love this poem! As a lover of music (and writer of it myself), I especially enjoyed the rhythmic cadence. Love, Light & Laughter Linda |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I love how you bring the connection between past, present and future together.We are what we've been. I love this one. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Really good write!!! Interesting use of words fersure |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
There is so much emotion in this- very well written. "What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been." |
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Tammy Blessing Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 366PA |
Thanks to all. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Tammy, I understand just how you feel, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you as I too have these silent screas for my sweet Joanna, and I wish for soon loud laughter of joy to escape your lips! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tammy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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