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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Wearing Thin Less of me is more, you see more of skin that wears so thin to touch the sky with more of eye each choice of take, is mine to make each choice of time, is make of mine ish of self still needs to feed upon these pages once the seed and yet entranced I do this dance shuffling back at each advance wearing thin from where I've been leads me nowhere once again... I wear the thin of you "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Excellent piece! I love it! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
where have you been??? I have missed you ~softsmiles~ Me |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Speaking of "excellent pieces"....what color of thin panties are you wearing?......Let's see, my schedule's open from....let me see....oh, lookie here, from now until some time next summer! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey TR..aren't you getting a bit personal here? I barely know you  btw..I needed a smile thank you for that "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-27-2002 03:34 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Personal?....Why no, I don't think so?....So tell me, what color are they?...LOL...hope you're doin' well gal.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you, today I am hanging on by a thread...so as long as no one unravels that..I do believe they are sheer black and will protect the necessary parts...now am I getting too personal for you???? btw again..did you know I am often told I don't have a sense of humor...haaaaaaaa [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (08-27-2002 03:41 PM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Excellent write!! I enjoyed this. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
sorry...just a bit of venting I guess [This message has been edited by Alicethruglass (08-27-2002 05:27 PM).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
If you think that's protecting you you're dreaming...and, Balladeer tells me I don't have a sense of humor all the time....wait a minute...he says I have no sense at all?.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
then I must be dreaming..so far it has protected me..but I am always game..depending on who it is...now see what you have done..you are making me respond shamelessly or is that shamefully..I get those two mixed up... as far as the Balladeer goes...I think you have at least two cents and can use them if you like... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen darling heart now this one I love, you manage to write the thin so well, always you hit the nail on the head and in this you have hammered home the point in your own beautiful style. As for you Toe, shhhh its not fair to ask about her thin black ones, it makes those of us who haven’t got any feel deprived Fabulous writing darling heart I love it utterly utterly love it   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
As always I love your replies...you make the interlude in my day pleasant. hugss M |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wonderful poem. And, indeed choices are ours to make. |
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