Open Poetry #22 |
a different pair of glasses? |
brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
how is it that my eyes work fine yet, I am still blind? I never aimed at reality; I aimed at truth. --Orson Welles |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
Yep, I know the feeling well. My glasses work great, but still I am blind to so many things. Nice poem. Short and to the point. Great for me, cause at my age, the attention span isn't so good either. Touch me with your whispers, |
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One Arm New Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 6Ga. |
Brian: A good write, but age brings light that can dispell blindness. One Arm |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wow! What a powerful piece and yet so brief...finely crafted, Sir. Love One Arm's response, too, full of wisdome. He must be older. White Rose's response is great, too, but maybe a little too close to home. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah...but could we see half of what we see with our hearts through our eyes, there'd be no need for corective lenses |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Just make sure the glasses you put on aren't rose-tinted. Mike |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I think that most of us are blind to what we really do see right in front of us, Brian... I guess we don't see what we see... I really loved your poem... ~ hugs from a bespectacled chipmunk Lyra |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sometimes that is so true. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
thank you all |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Preachin' to the choir here, my friend. Needed a bump. ~Ed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very good, Brian! Thanks to Wranx for the bump! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write here!! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Thanks, Brian, for your words of wisdom. Sometimes we only see what we want to see.... Best Wishes, Ethel |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
And sometimes we see, but don't say that we do..does keeping silent make the vision any less real? Does seeing but not saying justify the silence? Sometimes it's those who close their eyes that see the most because they are wise enough to speak of it. |
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