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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

0 posted 2002-08-27 04:16 AM

~*~ Atchoo to you too! ~*~

Flowers bud and bloom
Atchoo! Atchoo! Hayfever!
Darn dust and pollen

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon
[This message has been edited by Mysteria (08-27-2002 04:17 AM).]

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

1 posted 2002-08-27 04:30 AM

Bless you...bless you twice
Still the pretty flowers bloom
Noses pay the price

Tissue?

This is cute, Sharon.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-27-2002 04:31 AM).]

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2002-08-27 08:04 AM

Sneezes, puffy eyes,
Pollen beast stikes at worst time,
Summer blues prevail.

you too hey

If your afraid of the dark, then why did you come?

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-27 08:09 AM

Sweet flowers giggle
Teasing us with their pollen
Dancing like faeries

(smiles) Oh my gosh, I know this feeling so much, silly flowers! (giggles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2002-08-27 08:52 AM

Oh for Pete's sake, you're just NOW complaining of allergies? We've been full-force with using up all the hankies ever made around here since Spring! Had to smile at this one...you're just NOW slowing down long enough to feel the pollen's effects! Thanks for the smile!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2002-08-27 11:57 AM

I love writing haikus myself. I enjoyed yours and I'm thankful that roses don't make me sneeze! Nice touch with the animated rose!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2002-08-27 12:32 PM

too delightfully done and presented

I'm with Sunshine on having spent months perfecting my sneezes, roses aren't among the offenders for me though.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2002-08-27 12:36 PM

Sitting here with kleenex ready, eyes tearing...not because I'm sad...ejoyed this witty write. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-08-27 12:42 PM

So how is it that you could hear me sneezing yesterday?

Pollen everywhere!
Holding hands with dusty air!
Nose can't get away!

(Or is it air pollution from the big city?)

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

9 posted 2002-08-27 01:27 PM

Knowing this feeling right now

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

10 posted 2002-08-27 06:10 PM

Gee, thanks all this for 3 lines? Actually, I did this in response to Midnightsun's Atchoo last night, and get it? I said, Atchoo to you too! I have no allergies thank goodness, just my cat but we are buds that can't be separated, here have a look is she not the cutest?
Her name is Sheba.

check the necklace

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