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Sunshines Light (Dedicated to Our Sunshine)
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Sunshines Light (Dedicated to Our Sunshine) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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 Shining bright bright of light light that warms warms heart delight. Warmth of heart heart of gold gold of words words of soul. Writings of soft soft of peace peace of spirit spirits in release. Within the spirit spirit of SUNSHINE Sunshine of friendship friendship so divine. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
donna..like the lady your poem lights up the morning. Good stuff babe. You are quite the lady yourself. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Donna...this is SO dang beautiful! Our Sunshine is going to love this... I know I do! ~Hugs sweet poetess~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna She is a bright spirit. Your words so warm and sweet will be a treat for her, I'm sure!  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Awww...this is better than a treat...this is a certified  and I should KNOW! Thank you so much, little one... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (08-14-2002 02:38 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Bravo, for sharing this light. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Real nice, Donna. A special poem for a special poet. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ So lovely to see friends touching friends~ Just beautiful for a beautifully spirited lady~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Magician Member
since 2002-08-14
Posts 126 |
I like the rhymes, so divine. *S* I can really feel the friendship here. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You both are special reasons to be here.. Thank you for you and she for she~wink* Sincerely, Reg |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Yay!!! Oh Donna, I just know Karilea loves this so very much, you truly always show high spirits and love in your writing, this is breathtaking, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
Awwwwwwww Donna, it softens my heart to see others write so well of friendship and respect. And may i say, the alternate starting words of the first and line words was brilliant! Love that originality. It couldn't have been used in a poem any better than this this particular topic and time. Major Kudos, GreenStuff! ~huuuuggg~ jeff |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
a touch of friendship friendship to hold hold in warm embrace embrace Sunshine A beautiful verse for our Sunshine Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks everyone. Karilea is a very special lady and has brought me a moment of "calm" on many occassions. I do appreciate your replies and wish I had more time to answer you each in turn. Jeff, just wanted to say that Karilea is actually the one who did the rhyme scheme first, I just followed in her sunshiney footsteps is all. Peace to all and hugs....... Hey there Midnitesun it is soooooo good to see you back too!! Hugs. somebody tell me, please help me.... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Gentle Spirit- A lovely poem for a lovely lady. Beautiful tribute, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Bridget Shenachie Senior Member
since 2002-01-23
Posts 1056Kansas USA |
You said this so well for the rest of us who are blessed with the friendship of Sunshine! Shenachie |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is lovely, Donna... There is nothing left to say... Everyone else said all of the wonderful things and I agree with every single one of them... Thanks for sharing this with us.  ~ hugs from your chipmunk friendLyra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your lovely poem reflects your "Gentle Spirit". |
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