Open Poetry #22 |
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Time To Go |
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Alice in Wonderland New Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 4MO, USA |
There wasn't any clock set No watch to tell me when to go, No alarm to warn me Nothing obvious that would show. No commercial for me to watch No sign that I could read, No example for me to base my guess, I couldn't follow anyone's lead. There wasn't any book No articles or hidden inscriptions, No path I over looked, No confusing descriptions. I hadn't any special moment, That told me I'm done; No one obvious reason That proved that was the one. But I'm laying on the floor, Watching time spill through my gut; Until time was too short Shorter still cut. I didn't get to change, The things that I'd made as a goal; I didn't get a chance to save, Even my soul. And here in the last Minutes of breath, I think of the past And then think of death. I'm not ready to leave No not ready at all, I didn't prepare, And yet I had time to stall. Plenty of words to say To hurt those that care, Plenty of hate to spread And yet no love to share. So many regrets in this Small lapse of life, I won't give birth I won't be a wife. But I was a daughter I was a friend, Did I play my roll good? Til the very end? That is one thing I'm sure I'll probably never know, For now when I think of it It's time to go. "I know what you're thinking about," said Tweedledum; "but it isn't so, nohow." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hiya ![]() This is very interesting, thought provoking, visual and I enjoyed! great write. ~hugs~ Tracie~ P.S how rude of me, I didn't realize this was your first post, welcome to passions, I hope you enjoy your time here, It's a great home and everyone is so friendly and warm. Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe [This message has been edited by tracie66 (08-26-2002 05:56 AM).] |
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Welcome to Passions! Please check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
So much sadness in this poem. Welcome to Passions! Hope to see more from you. |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions!! Well written. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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Alice in Wonderland New Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 4MO, USA |
Thank you all very much--it's so nice to hear replies. --Jules "I know what you're thinking about," said Tweedledum; "but it isn't so, nohow." |
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