Open Poetry #22 |
Carla's Tears |
Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Tonight it was different When you called me to cry Cause we've grown so close That these tears felt like mine I know how you hurt I've felt all of your pain The memories we've shared Somehow all end in rain Let me be there for you this time When he needs someone to hit Let me shield you from the love Of his iron fist You say it's not my problem But I disagree See, you're more than my sister You're a friend that I need Let me help you escape Be the light in your night I'll show him tough love If he needs to fight If all I can do Is to listen sometimes I'll make you feel better Take your tears as mine So sleep well little sister Please know that I'm here To comfort your sorrow To dry Carla's tears I love you sis! [This message has been edited by Krishankins (08-26-2002 12:29 AM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You are a wonderful brother! I hope your sister finds a way to get out of that relationship. Hitters are losers. |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
nice one to your sister, Kris we're there for family and she's got a good brother I say, go have a talk with him brian |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
awwwwwwww..this is so sweet. Your sister is blessed with a brother such as you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Cause we've grown so close That these tears felt like mine ============================= those are very touching and tender words... they stood out and spoke to me.... Theres no easy answers in these situations..shes lucky to have you in her corner to help her be strong. A lovely dedication to you sister. Well done poet sir jm In the space between now and then |
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Gabriel Frost Member
since 2002-08-15
Posts 216Between midnight thoughts |
Your sister is indeed lucky to have a brother and friend like you.Good job sticking up for her. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is nothing quite like a brother's love... Your sister is in my prayers... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I wish the world had more loving and faithful brothers like you who look out for all their loved ones, my heart goes out to Carla and I too hope she gets free from that undeserved treatment! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristopher, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Beautifl, Kris. I always wished I had a brother to defend me. She is lucky to have you. Sandra |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You certainly are a blessing of a brother. Enjoyed your poem and I pray things change for the better for your sister. Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes Kris, I believe that you should have a good long talk with this cowardly [edit] [edit] piece of [edit]. Men(?) such as this need a little...uh,....tutoring. Sorry, but I just can't abide this behavior. Best of luck to your sister, my friend. She is indeed lucky to have you. ~Ed In reply to "which way do we go?", the answer was never "straight", but, "progressively forward". |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Kris- This brought a lump to my throat and a tear to my eye. You are one VERY special brother and your sister is very fortunate to have you. You've penned this beautifully and your love for her burns through like the flame of the candle. Thank you for sharing this. Hugs to you and Carla, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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