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Musings of the Elfin Tigress
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Musings of the Elfin Tigress |
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elfin_tigress Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 101Someplace |
A little here a little over there a little more here again so I can paint the clouds that show the world how to be soft It is a difficult task for someone who loves and feels as much as I always feel, especially now when it becomes a chore to feel and be alive to finish my quest to be as before and be like the parents that I still can't remember that gave me breath gave me soul A little here a little over there a little more here again so I can paint the scenes that can teach me how to be myself the self I was when I knew nothing of hate when peace and love of the whole world spun on when I didn't care what mortal men thought when I knew of magic not normality and beauty was my breath Perhaps the panther saw more than I wanted saw what I am A little here a little over there a little more here again so I can teach the world to breathe |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Honest opinion of your words? How about very creative, well thought out, simply a very nice poem that reflects a lot of character within it... And there is no sugar on this bowl of cereal.... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ElfinTigress~ *smiling* here~  You'd just have to know my fascination for SHAPED poetry to understand just how delighted I am to find this beauty~ FANTASTICALLY CREATIVE THOUGHTS~ Thanks for making my night~ Keep it up gal~ I'll be keeping a look-out for you~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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