Open Poetry #22 |
A Piece Of Art |
Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Where did the time go Like from afar I gaze upon your Beauty Your youth Inside and out A piece of art Once so small So dependent Now grown One of your own I see you in her You know From the twinkle In her eyes To her little tiny toes Watching over you Watching over her Is my gift The chain of love Forever Unbroken |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Zinsser~ Oh, this is just so sweetly done~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Marge: Thank You.... this came from a photo that was taken... great picture... says so much with out a word.... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is beautiful! Thank you for this word portrait of love. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
zinsser - you write of sweetness and love well. Very nice... BC |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
So sweet!! Great write, Zinsser. All writing comes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Connie, can I borrow you for a while, like maybe about the rest of my life....or at least just have someone like you...to let me feel that love, till time is still..and no more... |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
This is lovely. A view from a grandparents eyes. I see my son in my grandson and it warms my heart with memories of the man when he was just a boy. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love it, may true loves joy alwas fill your heart and be true art to you! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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