Open Poetry #22 |
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Autumn Collidescope |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
There breaths inside my heart A shivered dawning drive Where autumn draws expressive art In crisp cool dreams to thrive Another morning surges hard To clear the foggy dawn As last and first in best regard In love of life to fawn Then this peculiar feeling gives A blessing moist to thirst Beside so fully heaven sieves A show and place traversed There breaths inside these waking hours A time of gentle tales Where always to reside with me A newborn love prevails Another day spent solely in A closeness to your side When autumn colors peak again Another scope collide Copyright Kkh 8/25/02 |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
ThisDiamond - a gem you've written that sparkles this morning... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() ![]() ![]() (smiles) Oh Kathleen, this is wonderful, I love it! The colors of autumn always bring a smile to my face! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully breathtaking, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your 8/6 flow of this adds to the beauty of the poem's picture....Nicely done, flurb away Gridley!! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
This is lovely, Kathy... Oh how it makes me yearn for autumn... my very favorite season when acorns abound. ![]() Lyra |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simply a lovely write. Enjoyed. Chris ![]() Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You've written a lovely poem. Certainly one worth reading again and again. Enjoyed. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
What a delightful read you have gifted us with. I enjoyed this, thank you. If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream... |
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