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Little Star
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Little Star |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States 
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Little Star Little star up in the nighttime sky, Your brillance always catches my eye, A star to guide the shepards to, A new baby born, a life so true. Little star millions of years old, In your grasp, many stories you hold, A chance I'd give to learn the past, New lives began in a land so vast. Little star just out of human reach, In your wisdom many lessons you teach, Shining upon a world so grand, From prosperous cities, to small farm land. Wishing upon the same little star, You suddenly don't seem quite so far, Seeing you, brings mankind peace, And for a moment distances decrease. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Dawn, I enjoyed this piece so much... I found it to be both comforting and calming. Thank you for posting this tonight. ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ It is so good to see you back with this delightful piece~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Dawn, this is soooooo beautiful, yes, always believe upon that star and all your dreas will come true! (kiss on cheek) I have missed talking to you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Dawn, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Oh what a very sweet poem, Dawn... I have been quite agitated today for some reason, and your poem really helped to calm my nerves.  ~ hugs from agitated chipmunkLyra |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
Dawn, I love your poem. So much can be learned from just gazing at the sky, and so many lives are connected, as each star in the sky has so many eyes concentrating on them at one time. You can never know who else may be entwined together with you, as you ponder in awe at a simple star. Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem here for our eyes to capture. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a delightful poem. Thank you for sharing your little star today, Dawn. |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I want to thank you all for your heartfelt replies. I am sorry I don't have the time to do proper thank you's but I wanted to at least say this much, and will be back to thank each of you properly. Dawn |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Dawn this is such a lovely poem, leaving a peaceful smile upon my face. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Dawn, this could just about be a lullaby. Don't we all wish on a star from time to time? I certainly do.... Very nice, thank you... |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was a pleasant read. Thank you. |
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