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han_tigger Member
since 2002-08-10
Posts 50Thundersley, Essex, Uk |
Thunder. Thunder in the sky. The rain begins to fall, From far above in heavens, From where the sunshine falls. It begins to beat, As my pulse does in the night. Then the thunder strikes, Like a dagger from the sky. The lightening cutting through the darkness, Like a spear through my heart. The crash of rocks by giants, Playing in the sky. The gods throwing arrows, Arrows of shocking light, Cutting through the moonlit scene. Some strike right upon our earth, In fear we run away, From these terrifying sights. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh my, yes! I like to watch the thunder and lightning about 8 feet back from the picture window, with all the lights off. Then it can be awesome....out there, NOT in here! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Oh Hannah, I just love thunder, I have always depicted it as God's destined rage, a promise that all of the greed of Earth will be avenged with love and virtue! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hannah, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
One of those awesome displays really leaves you feeling insignificant and helpless... and inspired! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hannah~ Imagery-laden~ You made the lightning dance and the thunder resound~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed Hannah... Well done! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Good imagery of a common event. It left an impression. |
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