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To The Nothing Denied
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To The Nothing Denied |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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To The Nothing Denied in days my dreams may turn to sand and things not turn out the way I planned but at night I can dream of you where we run mudding our feet in dew and sail upon romantic moon beam tide where we kiss in shadows to the nothing denied closely dance to silver moon hung on air you are as close as sleep and I can find you there but just like the sand there comes an end to our play when day interrupts us and takes you away |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
perfect Helen...I could have been thinking those exact thought *s M |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Makes one want to rush to sleep, Well done Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
beautiful... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
helen - you're so soft with your writings. This one is that way, soft and delicate... BC |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Dreams will do in the absence of kinder days. Wishing you both. "Happy people have no history" - French Proverb |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
You always have a way of saying exactly what it feels like to feel that way..If that makes any sense? Very nice write. Sincerely, Reg |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This may be soft, but it is yearningly warm and wanting.....Oh yes it is! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Oh Helen, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I love it, such a soft yearning fills these words as the sand blankets the tone, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
So beautiful it's almost sad. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
This is great, bump to the top |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautifully done, it makes me want to dream forever. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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