Open Poetry #22 |
Fall - The Challenge For Greeneyes |
SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The Coming of Fall It was early in the morning the birds were not yet singing The road was red and golden from the the leaves that fell I wrapped by jacket round me as I walked along the gravel far beyond the subways close to natures call Every breath that I was taking Every sound that had bearing was just a whisper from the wind calling for the fall The clouds they looked like cotton high above the wild as I became quite conscious of how I was so small And so the day moved forward and in time I traveled knowing with each leaf that fell My time could be called I wandered for awhile stopping very often just to take another breath in wonder of it all.. [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-18-2002 09:58 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done....and such a pleasurable day you have painted with your pen's words... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Thank you Magnus. I'm glad you came along! |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Very lovely, Electra... a perfect fall poem.... Fall is my favorite season, and you've written it beautifully ~ hugs and smiles and acorns Lyra |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very special... Yes, the wonder of it all! ~Hugs~ ~ Time has cast a spell on you |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, fall is a wonderful season of magic and color, it is my second favorite behind spring, yay, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
This is just beautiful....I cant wait for the leaves to change, so that I can walk and take in the beauty.....thank you for this.... Lauren~ The ocean looks like a thousand diamonds strewn across a blue blanket |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
SimplyGold Good thoughts, good write, good read. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Thanks for the lovely stroll. *s When you think you have heard it all, |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
So glad each of you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it, had it not been for Greeneyes I wouldn't have?? Thanks for the inspiration. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
So glad each of you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it, had it not been for Greeneyes I wouldn't have?? Thanks for the inspiration. [This message has been edited by SimplyGold (08-19-2002 07:41 PM).] |
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