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Open Poetry #22

Now I say to you

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2002-08-24 12:18 PM

There's a new sadness
in my heart
all that I ever was
all that I've ever been
all that I ever could be
evaporates from my mind
I wish that I could dress up
in pretty clothes
and go off wandering
to love without loving
just for the sake
of a touch
Perhaps I've said too much
biting my tongue too many times
I'm ready to explode
maybe to find out
that my time with you
was always up
And in a shelter of passion
hide my love
because it hurts too much
to be deceived once again
Now I say to you
"no more"

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

1 posted 2002-08-24 12:20 PM

to love without loving
just for the sake
of a touch

Walker I can feel the pain in this. Very deep felt writing. Well done. Hugs.

If I have touched one heart through my words, then I have acheived my dream...

Krishankins

Senior Member

since 2002-06-23

Posts 972
Texas

2 posted 2002-08-24 12:20 PM

Beautiful!!! Simply Beautiful!!!
The words are so full of emotion!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2002-08-24 12:23 PM

You cannot make a horse drink,  once you
have lead it to the trough...  Nor can you
have the love you wish if the other can not
give it...

Yes,  enough is enough...you have said it
well and clear....

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-08-24 12:29 PM

(big hugggsssss) Oh Walker, my heart goes out to you, this is so very sad and yes, when you have enough take whatever action needs to be done! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

5 posted 2002-08-24 12:40 PM

walker - you've said it very well in this write. Let it out, things will get better. My best to you...

BC

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